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9th Feb 2020, 12:38 AM
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9th Feb 2020, 12:38 AM
Boy Phaff
Taking the last panel, on the far left is Mad Dog, on the far right is Dr. Laser, both were featured in the chapter Things Change. The fellows in the middle are the colourful Wormhole and Mr. Wilson (aka Hax'ooxan, aka The Dictator), both were mentioned in the same story. The lady is Zephyr who was seen in the nineties story Rock Paper Scissors.

So this chapter ends. It will be continued in a tale called Groundwar, right after the next little interlude Heaven and Back. Hope to see you relatively soon.


9th Feb 2020, 12:45 AM
Cool twist! Ares got hit by the "Infanto Ray"!
9th Feb 2020, 4:19 AM
hey, it's Apache Chief.

9th Feb 2020, 5:45 PM
Big Bro
Hhmmm...I think I missed something. I’ll read it again because I’m confused now.
9th Feb 2020, 6:23 PM
Boy Phaff
There's nothing complicated about it. See Ares as a crazed Shazam, little Ebbe here, as a massively screwed up Billy Batson. Try explaining to me how that's not clear. I left the Ares armor there, because that should make it evident he's changed shape. Doesn't seem to be working for you.
9th Feb 2020, 6:27 PM
Boy Phaff
We'll get into the how of the shape-change later, the why is his fiddling uncle, from the story's opening. Most readers will assume that takes place in the past. They are wrong.
9th Feb 2020, 7:42 PM
Boy Phaff
Okay, okay already! I've added another word balloon, hope that makes it all clear enough. Thanks for proofreading I guess.
Next question may of course be, how come Ares didn't change shape while dreaming on the plane? Well yes, I know why.
9th Feb 2020, 10:51 PM
Ah yes, the dream on the plane! It's a clue as to why he's fucked up in his head.
10th Feb 2020, 5:40 AM
Big Bro
Yeah no...then I got it. I thought the Ares Kill Express was a bit childish at the time.
Guess the dream scene being in the past threw me off. Like you guessed. Ok cool.
10th Feb 2020, 10:49 AM
Boy Phaff
There you go, you got the Ares Kill Express!
10th Feb 2020, 10:53 AM
Boy Phaff
And then there's the goddamn title of the story! I mean hello?
10th Feb 2020, 4:26 PM
Big Bro
And muscle Bugs Bunny on tv. Got that one as well.
10th Feb 2020, 8:46 PM
Boy Phaff
Good man. That's an actual Marvin the Martian cartoon. In our reality. As well.